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I repeated that part because I was too lazy to come up with anything more creative. XD I'm glad it actually added something to the poem, and that you enjoyed ...

I know, and it's a sound opinion. :3

I'm quite fond of the ending, too, and of silly poems in general. I have a few others in my portfolio, and if you don't mind a bit of potty ...

Limericks and I have a long history of getting along well with each other. I thought about splitting this into stanzas, but there really aren't any good spots to split ...

You're welcome. Hopefully you can apply some of the things I said to other works in the future.

Hello Kafka. Been a while since you last left me a review. :3 This poem actually deals with two sayings: "opposites attract" and "familiarity breeds contempt". Magnets are often used ...

Thanks for the review. Concerning the "that" in the first stanza, I tried it a bunch of different ways, including all with "that" and all without, and I settled on ...

I'm not sure why the description would attract you, but okay. XD The second half of the stanza is meant to read "(it has) everything to do with sameness". I ...

Thank you for the review. Now, I'm not a potato expert, but I have no idea if you're describing the potato or the potato eyes here, or whatever you're describing. ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You beat me by five minutes. ;.;

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Well, I'll just say that I didn't say you wrote it to be that way. I only said that it read that way. Sometimes what we mean to say comes ...

Oh dear. It appears in my haste to review this, I forgot to remember to change the {USERNAME} out for your name, WaitingForLife. Take it as a sign your piece ...

I'm dyslexic too, and yet you don't see me leaving rather obvious typos that a spelling checker would easily find in my works. Additionally, this is a site for writers ...