Kakali

Wow! Thank you so much! I feel privileged for being towards the top of your list! :) I really appreciate this review. I missed so many things, I'm glad there ...

Longer. Got it! Thans so much, your awesome!

Since your the second person who has said it needs to be longer I guess I will make it so! Thank you much!

Thank you! You gave a good review! :)

AHHHH! I love you for saying it sounds cool! I thought so too! :D

Thanks! And don't worry, compared to most people, yuou weren't picky at all. This really helped me, and I appreciate it greatly!

So. Intense. Need. MOOOOREEE!

No, Bob was bothering me too. I just thought I'd stick with it since it was the bob in 'bobcat'. I'll try to give him something more.... interesting. And yeah, ...

I get what your saying, and it really made me think. I actually thought I could just fix a few things here and there, and it would be fine, but ...

Thanks, and yes! If you haven't found anytihing wrong with this part, I would love to have your input on the next chapter, which I will be posting here on ...

No, your right about Jayden not putting himself with humans. And thanks, I was actually having a hard time with that sentence and I just couldn't figure out why! I ...

Oh my goodness! Thanks! Actually this prologue is really old, so i may adjust it a little bit, since my ideas compared to then aren't exactly the same, but it's ...

Thanks! I appreciate it! You know, I thought about that to, but later in the story we find out that he hasn't lived in the forest his whole life, just ...

wow i cant even count or spell. I meant 5 words. And I used descrition instead of description, lol.

Well I was quite ready to review this work when I saw it on your wall, but it seems like its had enough of that already. I just want to ...