KailaMarie

This is pretty good. I liked how you made it so that she ended up with Mike, that was really unique. But I think the whole Jacob thing is a ...

Hey! I'm here to review! The heat radiating off of him made her jump on the inside. It seems weird to jump on the inside because he's warm. Jumping seems ...

Well, I thought to myself, better get to sleep. I woke up in the morning, with my cuts stinging. Time for school, I thought. This was going to hurt. Ok, ...

Hey, sorry this took so long for me to get to. I forgot to check my Will Review For Food thread in a long time. Ok, on to your review. ...

Sorry this review took so long, I forgot all about my will review for food thread! Anyway, I really loved this poem. I can't really review for grammar, but I ...

Hey, I'm back! I smiled a polite smile as she examined what she could see of me with a catch in her breath. You say "smiled a polite smile" more ...

Whoa. Haha, crazy ending. I loved this to be honest. I only found one thing I think you might want to change. It’s refreshing compared to the harsh, stale hospital ...

I really liked your writing style. However, I agree with Jetpack that this plot is really cliched, and that we need to feel more attached to your characters. I'm not ...

Hello! I'm using this to avoid doing homework. Haha. Anyway... sandles meant for sand and surf rather then bitter Midwestern autumsn I'm assuming you meant autumn and sandals. Her throat ...

19 Minutes is really good. Jodi Picoult really is amazing. I didn't like this one as much as My Sister's Keeper, though. I thought the ending of that one left ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaila, and if you have any questions, you can just PM me. It wasn't too thin either. She was small, but not sickly like the ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaila, nice to meet you. (: I'm not going to nitpick because the others got the grammar mistakes, but as the others have said, the main ...

Hey! I'm Kaila. Ok, so onto the review. (: Welcome to Hell, where Satan goes as Mr. Moreno and pretty much everything is a piece of shit. Awesome opening sentence. ...

Hello, my name is Kaila, and I'll be your reviewer this afternoon. (: There’s not one inch of skin on you That hasn't been touched And you don't move an ...

Ok, so here I am for the review you asked for. Sorry for the wait! First opinion, I would put up the chapters seperately. It's more intimidating for people to ...