Kaia

I actually teared up, XD. This really reminded me of my two pets, mouse Kishi, and hamster Rosy. I don't know if I ever told you this story, but I ...

Ah...the drama begins!! *rubbing hand mischeviously.* So....they decided to report the murder. I would say that is smart except for what Cyprus mentioned. But I think either way, Prajuru would ...

Okay, woah...uh...I was NOT expecting THAT! But, I have to say, that is an excellent conclusion to this chapter. Really wants me to read on to see what happens next. ...

Okay, first of all, welcome to YWS!! I haven't seen another childs storybook writer here on YWS yet so you are a specially excellent edition to this community. :) I ...

Hello! I have arrived. :) Let's get into it. This chapter went by like a breeze. Even though I read it between to days as I have a lot of ...

What a read! I feel as if I just picked a horror novel off the shelf in a library and the cover just had two creepy button eyes looking at ...

Hello! I just jumped in at this chapter to give this piece a review. I'm quite impressed by the amount of intensity and emotions you built up here. The character's ...

Hey, Ari! I'm back! So, I really liked this chapter, too. I like how the pace of this story has picked up. The characters are nicely developed. I am under ...

Hm....the alpaca is writing about tortoises, now? Hm....that seems a bit odd. Well, let's get into it, shall we? I wouldn't be surprised if you did a bit of research ...

Hi, Turtle I mean...ahem.. TORTOISE Orabella. I'm here to leave you a quick review. :) I like your opening line a lot. The repetition of "Turtle" really got the idea ...

Hello, CornDogEnthusiast. I am here to review some more chapters. I'd like to start by commenting on your style. You use an incredibly informal style, quite suitable to the teenage ...

Hello, again! Let me quickly say that I read these parts of our order. (Typical me XD) But let's get into the review, now. Here Id like to discuss the ...

Hello! I noticed your little piece sitting in the Green Room and looking just a bit sad. As a tortoise, it's my pleasure to drop by and deliver encouragement and ...

Hello! Lady Kaia (of the purple flame) here to give this masterpiece yet another review. :) Once again, I have to comment on your excellent use of description. From Prajuru's ...

Hello, hello! I'm back again to review the final chapter available of this mysterious work by the title "Purple Stones." You did a marvelous job creating tension and creepiness in ...