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Hi, Rinisha! I kept meaning to continue this little adventure, but every time I got to your portfolio, I always got distracted with something else you wrote. This time, I ...

Hey, cookiesandcream123! Thought I'd stop by for a quick review. First of all, I want to say that you definitely have a talent with suspense and word choice. The beginning ...

Hi, Mercedes! Happened to be going through the Green Room (where all new works get posted) and found your piece! Figured I'd drop by and give you a review. But ...

Hi, VengefulReaper! Been about time for me to continue this adventure perhaps in order this time, lol. First off, I just want to tell you that most of this is ...

Hey, Rinisha! I feel like all your short stories here have an excellent moral tacked on at the end. So, let's get into it! From this story, there's an underlying ...

Wwwwhhhhaaatttt?? I didn't know "sakura" was a flower! Wow, I just learned something new today! One of my friends has a character named "Sakuro." I doubt she knew about the ...

Greetings, friend! I'm here to review the first piece of this story, so here goes! First off, I like the title. Fire & Lightening. Something about putting the (&) symbol ...

Greetings! I thought I might zip up in my review car to give your works an inspection. Okay, don't fear. I'm not that nitpicky, but I do have a few ...

Hi, cookiesandcream123! I have been enjoying the little comments you put on my book, I Knew. I thought it was about time to return the favor and spin over to ...

Greetings! I'm here to leave you a review! I feel like as I read this I'm reading the diary of a very emotionally injured soldier. He doesn't want to be ...

Greetings! I noticed your lonely work and decided to spin by to give you a review. My surprise when I come across THIS. Wow! I feel that you are an ...

Wow! I entirely forgot this story existed to be honest. So, I'm very glad I ran across "Just Clowning Around: Short story; A piece of Rei's memory" to remind me ...

Hi, Zyria! First of all, I love your pen name (assuming it's a pen name). I especially love names that start with "Zy." One of my characters' names was Zybryn. ...

Wow! I really liked this piece. I need to go back and read the other parts to this masterpiece! Now, let me go through the details I loved... "The metal ...

Wow! I love this poem. Thank you so much for sharing it with us on YWS! You obviously have a way with words. My favorite lines are "So fear not ...