KaiTheGreater

Okay. Sometimes when I read what's supposed to be light symbology, it just seems really dark to me- I wasn't sure if that was the case here, or if it ...

I mean, they might have insights about how good and evil relate, but normally they don't seem as bothered by the missing answers. It just doesn't weigh as heavy on ...

Something I forgot to mention (don't know if you'll find it helpful): I think a good approach for this, if you want to rework it from a lighter angle, would ...

Can't really think of what to say, except that this really touched me. Thank you.

Thanks for the review (and the follow)! I actually do have Synesthesia, and that contributes somewhat to my anxiety, which is what the poem is about. It's about trying to ...

Well. I am touched. :')

Thank you for this! I've been meaning to write a similar essay for a while, to clear up some common misconceptions about Christianity, but you've beat me to it. :)

Cool! :) It looks like you have a lot of potential as a poet. This one seems a little rough, although I couldn't pinpoint exactly why, but something about it ...

The last three lines are really powerful.

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Thank you! :')

Thanks for reviewing! Will definitely think on everything you've said. One thing, though- I was trying to go for a vague, listless tone, as one lost in grief (hoping it ...

Aww, so sweet!! :')

Scarlet- poetry isn't just about the meaning of the words, but also the shape and flow of them. If a poem seems full of run-on sentences, extra fluff, or awkward ...