Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek here for ANOTHER review for Review Day! It seems like all I've done for the past three hours if review... and you're right! This poem is amazing, and I can see how it could mean many different things, so I am willing to take a crack at deciphering it. Let's begin!
I really like the imagery in this poem, and my first thought with the color was that you had Synthesia, rare medical disorder where senses are swapped and heightened. For example, most people will see sound, but others can do anything from hearing burnt toast to feeling what something looks like... The sensory overload isn't so fun, though! Some people make a living painting songs and selling them off of their disorder, but it stunts normal growth and working abilities...
My second, more likely theory was that you are living in a world of diversity where you are constantly faced with new things, new numbers, new colors, and new things piled on to your life that you do not want to deal with. You are overwhelmed, and it is too much for you to take. You are drowning in your own life, unable to see what is normal and what you long for, as you are so distanced from 'boring'.
Great work! You really are a poet worth following...
-ZeldaIsShiek
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