Kagi

This was too confusing to really be able to critque you're work today. I know this category is called short stories but I don't think this stroy suits this length! ...

Please write more.. It's well written and easy to read. The characters are interesting and unique well worth pursuing. Please pm me when u write more. Continue to work on ...

Well done first of all I really enjoyed your writing! You are obviously very practised becaus eyour writing is quite formal. It sounds like you are actually writing a diary ...

Wowsa.. Get out the camera's guys-this book is film worthy! Haah x No really this peice is super-and its only your first!? I loved it. How you flaunted yourself at ...

Well miss violet. Kaka will be the critque of your writing today. .... .... Speechless! Utterly speechless! You are only the same age as me and you can write like ...

Its kaka here!! As been said before-Sometimes little is better. And this time, that saying just sums up your story. It was interesting and drawing. I was completely un-aware everyday ...

So the names kaka. Kaka will review your peice today. I can be quite harsh but please don't take it all on board. Well I mean do. But like not ...

So, I'm kind of hyped up on cough drops and Red Bull. I wrote this in a fit of spastic inspiration and don't be surprised if it makes the list ...

"Wanna go to a movie?" he had asked shyly. "Sure," I had replied. Had I just been asked to go out on a date ? And not just with any ...

Remind me why this is in the romance section?! :D It was good and exciting ( and disturbing ) But not romance material!! Review over it and maybe add in ...

Okay..this had a good plot but to be honest I didn't feel the story enough.. I needed more inside emotion from the charchters..whether you were truly happy or was there ...

Woah,swell story! You got great talent and they story lacks nothing! I'm really impressed.. The detail was great and very moving. I felt as though I was there. You know, ...

Woah... Speechless,have nothing else to say.. Does that in any way explain what a talent you have?! I wrote a story,my first romantic story, and I got a lot of ...

Yeah I agree.. WOW! Haha.. you have a talent and I'd really love to read more. Your title was really catchy and drawing . It sucked me in.. :D Your ...

---Sadness is welling up--- Wow! YOu sure know how to write about emtion. Your ending was perfect and your description was perfect. I wouldn't put too many of threethreethree words ...