Kafkaescence

Even today when I listen to those songs it brings in old memories along. Those meetings, those calls. Were they false or had any meaning at all? How about just ...

Ha. You give me a challenge, Ehte. Yes. This will require extreme reviewing ninja skills. However, nothing scares this user. Except llamas. But that's beside the point. So. Lend me ...

Bleh. Thanks for requesting a review. I was getting pretty bored. Actually was doing the sudoku , believe it or not. Who does the sudoku? I guess I do. Or ...

Today is a beautiful day. The clouds are towering, a Rolling, boiling mass of heartbleed blue Uh...boiling? While I crick my neck and spin, my undeserving Dunno about "undeserving." Too ...

I call, I scream, I shout a name. Meh. Not sure I like the last part. But who can I trust, just who can I blame? I think the "just" ...

Satin sheen, Nice start. softened green gleaming, I think just "soft" would suffice. rumpled, with the hours. "Rumpled?" Ack. Not an impressive word. And "with the hours" sounds somewhat odd ...

Here I am. Sorry about the delay. My girlfriend dumped me today. Right next to my locker during the passing period between third and fourth hour Whoa. Location/general time/specific time ...

I sit there, abandoned; "Sit" is bland...I think "lie" might be better. Also, this line in general is pretty cliched. That thing you never use. You could put in a ...

If there was never a word that I could offer, Start poems with a bang. This is more like a measly whimper. There was not enough hatred, Okay. Establishing the ...

Can you feel that static? Nice opening line. running through the yellow grass, cut ever so close. "Cut ever so close?" To what? I'm not sure what to picture here. ...

Crescendoing colors burst from beneath his eyes; Great. it was like he'd been staring at the sun for a decade, Not sure what this is supposed to accomplish. I don't ...

Kindle your spirit, stoke your drive, forge your self, Sounds strange because "yourself" is usually one word, and though in this context it wouldn't work that way, it is next ...

Prologue: Genesis of the Beginning Forêt Des Quatre Piliers, France: February 10 10:19| The metal sphere dimmed ; the light receding from the room , and once again leaving it ...

“So how did you find me here?” Mr. Daniels took a sip of his coffee, decided that it was too hot to drink, and then set it back down on ...

Wow...I watched the video, and this was very well put together. Actually, I think the "half page down" line somehow fits. It makes you think, and can definitely be interpreted ...