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Thanks for the critiques, guys. ^^

How can I not agree with you? :P This piece made me even more grateful for YWS. Thanks for the read. KD

Thanks people...I took all your ideas, any criticism, etc. into consideration. I'm glad that it touched some of you guys; it makes me feel good. ^^ -Kae

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, guys! I'm glad you could relate. And yes, I really don't know what category to put this in, haha. It is halfway to ...

^^ Thanks, Jordan! You're not generally supposed to know exactly why he's standing out in the rain...I leave it to the reader to think of different ideas, haha.

Whoa, I didn't know I got another review on this! Thanks. ^^ Yeah, I started doing the whole formatting thing recently. Know what you mean; maybe I'll go over and ...

One thing, shouldn't this be rated 16+? (: Meh, I dunno.

*likes* Awesome, as usual! ^^ Ugh, I wish I had some critiques for you, but I never do. *pouts* Haha. ~KD

Thanks so much for the reviews and feedback, Fashionist, Yuri, and Elinor! They made my day (: I'm glad that the emotion in this piece came across well.

Sorry I never thanked you guys for your reviews. ^^ @ Yuri: When I said that her fingers were spinning around calamari dishes, etc., I meant that she was deciding ...

Oh...thanks so much for reading this! :D I'm glad you liked it.

I thought this would be a cliche filled, unemotional poem; but I was very wrong! I loved the 'plastic into gold' line; it's beautiful. Very nice! I loved the flow ...

Haha, thanks much, yuri! Whatever feedback you can give me is great. Thanx- KD

Oops...lol, sorry I didn't answer you earlier! Yes, every time you start a new story, or add a new chapter to your story, make a whole new post in the ...

Thank you so much everybody for the lovely reviews! Scream&Shout, I reviewed your latest chapter. :D