Kaedee

Hi darkangel. I'm KD. Today I'm gonna give you a little help on...*drumroll* ...Prepositions & Tenses! (Problems in red. Important corrections/things to point out in italics.) I found a lot ...

Hey, Jackle! This was interesting, especially Kasia's family. I felt as if I was right there in the story, or as if I was Kasia. Overall, this was pretty well ...

Hey bluewaterlily. KD here to review! I won't give you a nitpick review today, since you already got two good ones before me. I'll just give you an 'overall' review ...

Hiya NinjaAnimeFreak! Welcome to the site. KD here to review! Pros: -Very, very interesting! Cool idea. -I love the way you ended this prologue... -...and especially the line that talks ...

Hey Emmi! I'm Kaedee, and I'll be reviewing your story today. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -Great dialog. From this dialog, I got a pretty good sense of ...

Updated/changed after re-reading again. :D Hello reg, I'm KD, and I'll be reviewing your piece today! Well, don't I sound professional? Lol. All added words/sentence corrections in bold. Comments are ...

Hey, Kay. This wasn't bad! You've got a very good idea here. And you wrote it well, except... ...This piece feels empty! Emotionless. Take advantage of the first person POV. ...

Hey ana! I'm KD *waves*, and I'll be your reviewer today! (Or one of your reviewers...) Okey-dokey. Content: “Yeah...fine , ” replied a pain-looking Jay . I think this sentence ...

Not bad! I think this would be even cooler if the moon was not right dead in the center of the page, but more to the left or right. (Oh, ...

Hey pages! I was sold by the beginning, and I kept on reading through all the way to the ending. Nice job! My favorite scene was the blood scene. You ...

Esther! I don't think there's a need for an introduction anymore, right? Characters: You've developed Anita and Alex fairly well through these seven chapters. You haven't exactly stereotyped either of

*releases deep breath* Okay, I'm gonna try reviewing this. Big step for me, since I can't really/don't really review poetry! So, I'll try my best. Maybe I'll just review the ...

Yo. KD here. Welcome to YWS! I'll review your story piece by piece today. Name: Kayden Maline O’Connell Age: 22 Residence: Northbend, Washington This story is about my little sister, ...

KD here to review your story, piece by piece! "It was nothing babe, I didn't even mean for it to happen , . " If only I could believe his ...

Hey Cindy, welcome to the site! This is KD here, ready to review. Okay. This was...okay! This prologue doesn't make me want to immediately start reading chapter one of your ...