Jyva

no need to be that rude, but yeah.

i haven't read the rest of your story so i can't really comment on the plot, sadly. all i can really do is the quality of the writing sentence structure ...

thanks liz um eva was living at this warehouse and it just got blown up. people are coming over to try help her as she has a flashback/panic attack thing ...

bruh

split this thing into separate submissions, dude. too long

short, cute little poem - until the ending. :P i think you should format this thing properly, so it isn't one chunk of text, and sort it into stanzas. >Their ...

split the chapters up into individual submissions, man; we're willing to review long pieces of work, but not THAT long

thank you! :D

>Why do you only post 500 hundred words at a time? Is it that you want help on those parts or are you proud of them? yeah i want help ...

fix your grammar and spelling pls

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is this YA satire

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thank u