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Re: Ghosts
Love the word choice. I had never heard or read the word bespectacled until I read this work or pure amazingness. What exactly does bespectacled mean though? Love how you ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Daddy?
Holy moly guacamole! This is really good. This story really touches my heart. I can relate to this because my uncle had his dad pass away and he became so ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: Bus Trip
First of all, I was wondering if this was based on a true story and if so, was it based on someone you knew. This story kept me on the ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: The Unplanned Funeral
Nice job. I noticed you said this wasn't your best piece of work but this was dang good. I love the description you used for the corpses on the side ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: Digging
Great story and I love the ideas that you put into it. I wish it had more details in it because lately the work I have been reading has had ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: What's Left of Us
Amazing description!!!!!!!!! I love how the character seems to know that everything will be okay without even knowing what will happen. The character seems to have that feeling of self ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: Love is Cannibalism.
First of all, great title and description, I love them both. When I saw the title I was like, "Cannibalism?", and then I thought to myself that this was going ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: The Life of a Smartphone
This is hilarious, (which I hope is okay). I loved every bit of it and I feel like this explains the lives of about everyone that has or wants a ...
Sep 30, 2016
