Justagirl

Thank you for your critique and comments. I'll consider taking out some parts... I'm glad you think my work is unlike other pieces you've read -- that means a lot!

Thanks so much for your comments. I'm glad you could read into my poem. It seemed kind of sketchy to me when I posted it, haha.

Thank you for your comments and critiques. I understand about the dragging bit you said... It means a lot to me that you like my poem.

Thank you for your comments and critiques. It means a lot to me that you like my poem.

Thank you so much for your critique! The punctuation bit was just what I was looking for -- you're right about just about all of it. I'm glad you can ...

No, no, no!!! Don't flush it! I wanna read moreeeeee!

Bites*

I feel stupid that I'm replying to my own review, but as I read everybody else's comments, I feel like I'm being harsh. *Bits lip* Sorry... :/

Oops, I made a mistake up there in the quote at the top... Of course YWS doesn't wanna let me Edit my review, so: The boy, Jake, had a set ...

Wow, this is really great! I loved reading it. :D Keep writing, Justagirl

Thank you all for your likes and reviews! (More will also be appreciated ;)). I do say everything as ev-er-ry-thing so that's why I counted it as 4 syllables instead ...

Hey guys, Thanks for the reviews so far. You've been great ;) Just found out I had to include a couple more things in this poem so there are some ...

Thanks so much for all the great comments and reviews you guys! It really means a lot to me :D -Alzora

Interesting. Try reading through it to revise it because I think it needs a bit of that, ok? Pretty good though! Keep writing, Alzora

Very nice! I didn't see any problems - congrats!! Keep writing, Alzora