Just_Listen

I like this part too!! it's sweet how luke thinks of others before himself. i like that about him. you did a great job of characterizing them. i think you ...

Oooo, i loved it!!!! and it's not twilighty at all now, so that's good. You are so mean! i was so looking forward to being in your story, stupid Faith. ...

Better! i like it, not so many nows. I think it had a greater effect with the less nows. There is one more thing i'd like to add though. After ...

I really liked this. Its short and simple and gets right to the point. I agree with Evi and you should move the ands to the next line. Just to ...

ok, I really REALLY liked this one. This is very descriptive and is true. Well true for me, as you know. May I keep this one por favor? I can't ...

Oh my gosh, this poem is true!?! I am so sorry. Your poem is beautiful. It is very descriptive and the emotion leaps off the page, well screen. It is ...

Ok Jada, I loved your story! The ending wasn't my favorite though because it left me hanging! But i have to admit I did like the short, sweet ending. There ...

That is awesome!!! You really deserve this! I've been following what you have written but never posted anything because it is all so good! I hope you continue writing and ...

I really like this story, it's kept me entertained. I love your use of words. You will be a great author someday and I look forward to reading more of ...