JustALittleBarry

Hello friend! Kitty here! First off, I absolutely loved how you emphasized "Tick, tock" each time, I thought it was a nice touch. It gave it a large, "bold" (see ...

Hey! Katrina here! Thanks for the review! I will have to fix those errors, YWS was glitching a bit, "good bye" was what I mean, not "go", oops XD The ...

No! It was great!

Omigosh, I'm so sorry! I just realized that.... oops %uD83D%uDE4A

Thank you for the suggestion, I do see where you are coming from. However, I believe that I'm going to keep it with "just the other day" for a personal ...

Hello! Thank you for your review! I do understand why one might say that the title is a bit confusing. I did ponder the idea of adding that this was ...

Hello, Kat here for a review! This poem was wonderful and touching. The beginning of it faintly reminded me of the TØP song, "Stressed Out", however as much as I ...

Hi there, Kat here! I did enjoy reading this poem very much. It was full of imagery, which added a great affect to it. I especially liked how you crossed ...

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment and welcome me to YWS. Though I have only just joined I feel like this is a much better fit ...

Thank you for your review! I did fix my error and I am very happy that you pointed it out. "Quite" and "quiet" are often words that I mix up, ...