JustACanvas

All I could think when i read that line where she says she loves him but loves Sean too was 'noo' especially since hed gone back to her! That was ...

I really like the begining of this as it actually made me want to read on. You get a lot of stories, or openings, which you think 'aaa i cant ...

I've read quite a few of your post in the romance section and this is the first one where I thought "mmmm I would like to comment." I like the ...

Ahhhhh. I actually loved this. The originality was so refreshing, it's really quite clever and the best part is the simplicity; this makes it almost beautiful :) Who knew you ...

After reading this I'd love for you to look at my pieces of writing. Even though I doubt you use this forum and that people actually understood what you were ...

I couldn't help but post here and say this is very interesting I love the use of ''her'' and ''she'' as it shows the distance between each other yet the ...

Heyy, just wanted to say I can see the effect you are trying to have but as ziggiefred pointed out the first paragraphs should entice the reader into the story ...

Is there more of this posted on here? I'd love to read it send me a link? If not you should put some up because I want to know how ...

Write some more of this please!! I don't understand her reasoning for hating him in the first part but as you read on you want to know more. Your writing ...

Personally to me the end was about the memories he (the person she is talking about) possesses whether that be a physical box or not. Just like her box is ...

I think it sounded rather poetic, especially with the mystery of the characters being so apparent. i found the structure a little all over the place - arguably that could ...

Personally, I thought this had a certain charm to it. I like the fact that you see it progress, and yes it is poetic, but some great stories how a ...

I thought this was really good, I can relate to Lily's point of a cliche coming but not from twilight but Noughts and Crosses : best friends, kiss, fall in ...

I love the beginning, where "Fay" has so many thoughts in her head as she wakes up. You can almost feel a tempo to it! It is very funny and ...

What I like about this is the use of ''Him'' in the opening sentence. No name, but something more personal. The issue I have with it is this : So ...