Juniper

Well said. *applauds*

I adore this review-- thank you so much. :) I wrote this well over 5 years ago, haha, so I like to think my poetry has improved somewhat. Or so ...

Oh so now you're the June review police!? I'm just going for quantity now; I lost ten hours of review time because life happened.

Howdy there, Cosmo, I'm Juniper, My mind isn't quite sure what just happened here, but I think I like your creativity with words here. Save for the part where the ...

Sorry to make two consecutive posts so close together. It makes me look bad, but, I thought I had another engagement, but I didn't, so. On listening I believe that ...

Thank you all, so much for the wonderful feedback! Especially Jack; I can now revise this when I get around to it. At any rate, I think I should explain ...

No worries, Emoticon. :) If my criticism was too harsh, I apologize. I often review at late hours and don't think clearly. Nonetheless, I critiqued it because it was posted ...

Geeze, you do reply fast :P. Also -- Packies; I usually see it spelled as Pakis verse Packies, assuming you're referring to Pakistanis. Could just be a regional spelling or ...

You have to join the group, Fruit. At the top of the page, you may see a link that says 'Join this group'; click it. :) June

There forums are made for works that you wish to recieve critiques on. A word is impossible to critique; try including this word in a poem of some sort, and ...

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Check the dates before you reply to threads, please. Try not to bump up old posts; this is 4 years old. Locked.

Hey Kylan! Behind the waterfall, I'm not exactly sure where to start on this one. I like it for the imagery you're using, but I kind of think that you're ...

I changed the wording of the ending, but the meaning's pretty much the same. Haha, does it seem like a love poem?

Thanks for the review, Mandorelute. :) If you can't tell, it's about Soldiers, haha. I've edited the poem a few times since posting, and updated my original post.