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Re: Knife
Hey there Dude! I owe you reviews. I really do, especially on your script. So! I stumbled across this and figured I'd drop a review on it. One word: Brilliant. ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Chapter Twelve -- Power and Traitors
Jon! June here :D Next part! :D *puts harshness hat on* :twisted: The sun was peering through the horizon and the air was a little warmer than it was. The ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Chapter Eleven -- Ruby's Secret
Hey Jon! June here! You should be proud of me! I finally got around to this :D. Now, my reviews as of lately have not been too indepth, but blah, ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Poem
Hey there Blair! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :D. I read this as soon as you posted it, :P so my review is much delayed. ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Poem for a Fallen Soldier
Hey there Kamas girl! I'm June :D I love these type of poems that honor the fallen! There's something about them that just appeals to me, even if they are ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: My Shame
Hi, VampDollie! Welcome to YWS! I am June, and I am going to review this for you! First of all, do not say your own work is terrible! My dad ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: "Who are you, really?
Hey there Dusty! Thank you so much for the reviews on my poems! I figured I should review you too :D. Thanks for the kind comments as well. I promise ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Bloody Kisses<33
Hey there Evil Kookies! :D I am June, and I am going to review this for you! It's completely okay that this doesn't all rhyme. In fact, it's posted in ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: The Yellow Box in Hara
Hi there Natalie! Welcome to YWS! Nice to meet you! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you. :) This was quite an intriguing poem. It's definitely-- ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: The Butterflies Dance No More
Hey there Evi! June here! Aw! This poem was so sweet! I like the imagery and how you "placed" yourself in this poem. You made yourself the focal point, but ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Lies
Hey there, Gale! June here :). When I clicked this I wasn't really expecting anything like this. This is great :). I can really feel the tone that's set here; ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: What Happened.
Hey there Lauren Marie! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you :). Before I begin, I want to mention to you that YWS has a 2:1 ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: A Test of Metal
Hey there Famous Author! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! You began in a perfect rhythm, ending each line with a perfect rhyme. In some places, ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Midsummer Night's Dream Part 11
Hi Dude! June here! You have my permission to scream at me for taking so long to get to this. I am so sorry! I kept getting distracted and then ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Falling to Pieces (Death Metal)
Hey there Gluz! I think I promised you I would review this a little while back, but I only just remembered. The tone in this song for heavy metal is ...
Feb 5, 2009
