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Re: Difference [1]
Hi Caticle! June here! :D Erm, I totally just made that nickname up, so don't ask -_-. It seems like most of the little things about this have been pointed ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Burn the hospital.
Yay! Hi Eraqio, June here! :D Let's see! Corrections first, other stuff later ;). A slap to the face with and appreciative smile, you can get angry hon, its only ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Fearless Battle with Imprudence
Hi Peanut Gallery! June here! :D I like your title for this poem alot. Because the actual title (Fearless Battle with Imprudence) is not included in the stanzas of the ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Words
Hi Peanut! June here! Eeps! Take your time when you write, dearie! Don't worry about all of the good reviews disappearing-- in fact, that never happens! If you see someone ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Being me (Part 1)
Kamas! Kamas! June here! :D I need to review more of your stuff! I like it, it's always enjoyable, but I always never have time to leave a review! Let's ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: My Fair Maiden
Hey Jon! June here! So, Official YWS Challenge Maker, eh? Just for having that as your custom title, I present to you a challenge: Get your 5th review star before ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Struck Sightless- prologue
Hi Poem Person! :D June here! I'm so sorry it took me ages to get to this. Ugh, physics homework had to be finished before I could review again, so! ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: In a Sea Shell
Hi Hozzie, June here :). I agree with JareBear there; your poems just radiate awesomeness. Let's take a look: I’m forever moving. I pirouette across the world. See, here, you're ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: This Time Today
Hi Hannah! June here! The rhyme you used in this gave this poem a semi-fun way of reading. The content of this seems somewhat on the sober side, but it ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: You'd seem so stunning.
Hi Eraqio! June here :). Yay, more work from you! Let's begin! (I actually think I should begin with my disappointment... you didn't PM me when you posted this! *growls*) ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: Quilt
Hiya Alice! June here! There isn't much for me to say about this other than I extremely, really, terribly love this, I will star it, and read it often. Totally ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: My 21st century Prince Charming, a love sonnet
Hi there, Velvet Whisper! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. I'm going to start by pointing out little things along the way, dear, and then, I'll ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: She
Hi Darko! It's June! :) Great to see more work from you! Let's run over this, shall we? :) I could lost myself in her pretty blue eyes like a ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: The execution
Aloha, Lukas! June here :). Nice work on this! Let's see: Crowd: Kill him, Kill him! Man:eh, you can’t do dis, I havnt done nothin wrong. • I know I ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: My New World
Hey Peyton! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). I love the concept here, and I love the way it's written. The lines are short, making ...
Mar 16, 2009
