Juniper

Hey Marz! June here! (You've attacked the poetry forums lately, I see :P) One of the hardest things about people requesting reviews is reviewing the piece and not finding anything ...

Hey there Zakku! June here! (I haven't reviewed anything of yours in ages, no joke) The Ninth Period Bell has just rung I do not feel the urge to run ...

Hi Rodhead! June here! (This, and Mars's comment make me want icecream!) So, this is a cute piece. You're lucky you were writing poetry at eleven years. :P It made ...

Hey there, Juniper here! So, Megan, as you say, this is an important subject to write about. It naturally raises awareness on a certain subject, which is wonderful, because people ...

Hi Ofir's-brother! I'm June! This is wonderful. :) Haiku is a tough type of poetry to nail, and I think you've done it quite well here. For the sake of ...

Hi Kyllorac! Juniper here! This was suprisingly enjoyable and sweet to read. I have to agree with Mars on this, I love how the narrator is in denial/refusing to accept ...

Hey there, JessaRose! Welcome to YWS! Before I begin this review, I just want to mention that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that for every story/piece you ...

Hey there Baile, Juniper here! It's been so long since I reviewed poetry properly, so I'm sorry if anything I say is kind of off/against my better judgment. Let's have ...

Hey there, June here! Let's get crackin' on this! A child at play falls through the spring air. Her small fingers clawing at the emptiness. She can see it, and ...

Hey Splooshie, June here. I'm quite surprised no one has reviewed this yet. Pretty awesome chapter here. Now, only thing that I spotted that could be corrected is this one ...

Oh, Kamas, you are wonderful. Hey there, June here, and I truly enjoyed this story. I can't give a good review on this; I've been sitting here staring at this ...

Hi Kylan! June here! I'm honestly going to hope this is what you told me to review yesterday? If not, attack me and then let me know which one I ...

Conrad, June here! -_- How? You give me a piece to review that almost doesn't need a review? Seriously, you and Kylan are going to have to stop asking me ...

*Enters in harsh-review glory* Hey Jonbo+Y³, Juniper here! Let's jump right into all of the bad stuff about this. I love it outside at night. The air is crisper, the ...

Splooshie! Juniper here! :) So, let's see: something wrong?” I asked. I could feel the girl stir a little in discomfort. This is definitely a nitpick, but, when using an ...