Juniper

Hey Kylan! June here! [I know, I need to review Yellow. Will do, will do, I promise.] Alright, to begin, I'm kind of short on time [again], so I think ...

Hey there, Dark Angel: These forums are for posting your own work and getting reviews on them. If you'd like to make a thread where people can discuss poetry, feel ...

Hello, Black pencil! Welcome to YWS! I think you're off to a decent start. One of the first things I noticed about this poem is that your main focus is ...

Hey Liam! Welcome to YWS! I just want to remind you of the 2:1 ratio policy rule. For every piece you submit, you should complete two reviews prior to your ...

Hello, Bacon! [I hope you don't mind me calling you that... xD] Sorry, sorry! I'm so slow with getting around to reviews, you see. I forgot, and then forgot again... ...

Hello, Hero! I'm June, welcome to YWS! Impressive! I enjoyed this-- I usually don't read lyrics, because I can never find a melody to place them to in my head, ...

Hey Out of the box! Welcome to YWS! Nice job for a first poem! There's definitely room for improvement, but nice job starting off. To begin, I have to say, ...

MY HEART IS HAPPY. Snoink poetry. Mmm. So! When I read this the first time, I instantly enjoyed it. To start, it sounds like it's coming from a frustrated bus ...

Hey there! This is decent, but it needs work! It's skinny, and could definitely use some fat! What I caught here was a person/character struggling to fight back, who's essentially ...

Hey there! I'm not so sure of this poem. I didn't really like it, because it portrays a difficult time for this character, where the character is struggling both emotionally ...

Hi, Yoyo! This is very bad! A Yoyo poem unreviewed? We must remedy... (This has made my day much better. I have been longing for an enjoyable poem worth the ...

Hey there! June here! I am not terribly fond of this poem, but it's not entirely bad. Of the first things I noticed, I found that this reads more like ...

Hey, Ellie! June here! :D I meant to review this so much sooner, but never found the time, I guess! Here we go: My first impression on this poem was ...

Hey Vampire! June here! It's an okay poem. :P Perhaps I'm a bit biased in saying this, but poems relating to love, and anything surrounding love are a bit overdone. ...

Hey there, Hawksie! June here! SO! Pay attention to the things the previous reviewers pointed out. They have a point! Now, for my shred... I just want to watch you ...