Juniper

Hey, Chevy! I enjoy this poem for the relaxed prose tone to it. I do agree with Jack, though, on the comment that this doesn't pick up until the later ...

Hey Vale! June here, It seems most things have been covered, so I shall do a quick bullet list. - Write & out. Numbers and symbols should be written out, ...

Lisa! How adorable! This is a wonderful poem, and I cannot really critique it, because it's just terribly adorable. I can see this on a hallmark card or something. ;) ...

Kat! I'm with Blink and Snoink here. I do agree that you did a well job with giving a common theme a read of interest, and really, you did do ...

Hello! Welcome! I really enjoyed this! Much like the Snoinkosaur, repetitive poems do drill on me, and before this got bad, it got interesting, so I enjoyed it! I think ...

AET LINDING, YOU ARE THE BEST POET, EVERS. Pez (is that the plural form) are wonderful things; at first I didn't like them, because they tasted like they should have ...

Welcome, Sans! I really like your username. June here. :) This is fair. Good because it has potential, and not so incredible because it's hard to see where you're going. ...

Bonjour! I'm going to back up Snoinkarine on the suggestion of checking for spelling errors, dear. I would point them out, but I are lazybones this morning. Nonetheless, I think ...

Thajaro! I don't really like sonnets. One of my friends and I often write poems to share with each other, and when we get lazy, we write really silly, sappy, ...

Hey there, Herzing! The electric purple In his argyle veins Are like the blood He feeds me SO, brutality is welcome? Sweet. :twisted: Okay, so, the problem with this stanza ...

Hey Midnight, This was a pretty poem! I enjoyed the theme, and the images. I do feel that the images could be strengthened with more visual description. I think the ...

Hello! June here! I think you have a decent sketch for a poem here, but I don't understand some parts. For instance, on the look of it, why are the ...

Hey Shoaib! A decent poem, indeed. I think that the rhyme holds you back a little here, because instead of getting your message out, it seems as if you're trying ...

Hallo! To concur, the emotion is well displayed here. As a critic of stylistic devices and lesser things like that, I'd like to see this reworked a bit. It's fair ...

Hey there, This may not be too bad of a start, but I don't like it because it's short, lamenting-tone-ish, and at the end brings us to no positive resolution, ...