Juniper

(Hey there Stori! June here :)) Whatever else happened, I was thoroughly sick of "being" Terrence Rayne. I shifted back to my real form and breathed a sigh. No offense, ...

Hey there Dragnet! June here! I'm going to review this for you. It was short, so there's nott much to touch on structure wise, but this reminds me of something ...

Hey there Explosive pen. I can't believe this has no reviews. I find it unfair that nonfiction is so often overlooked. It bothers me, because when pieces are written well, ...

A/N: lol (Jigs! While horribly confusing, this made me snort in laughter. I couldn't help it, it was too funny xD.) I coughed, shifting uncomfortably in my cramped position. Dust ...

Hey there! This story was absolutely brilliant. Amazing. *stars* It was great. The war scene was brilliantly portrayed. You'd think that you have actually seen it yourself. There's nothing I ...

Hey Samantha! June here! I'm hooked. I loved the way you build up to the events here. Very well done. There was very little to critique here-- no grammar mistakes. ...

Chapter 1 (Hey there Jordan! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you. ) "Hey Check out this site." (change that period to a comma!) Derrik said reaching ...

Hey there Wise One! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. Welcome to YWS! We have a 2:1 policy, which means that for every one piece of ...

Hey Glow! June here! Brilliant poem! I love the structure, it was well done. You drew us into the poem and hold our interest until it's over. The only nitpick ...

Hey there PraiseJoe! June here, and I'm going to review these poems for you. 1. The first was very good. I mean really, really good. Like, Brilliant. At first, I ...

Hey there CoolCat! I'm June and I'm going to review this for you. Welcome to YWS =). As Nate said, we have a 2:1 policy which means that for every ...

Hey Bear! A poem by you! Yay! Pft, push all comments about being not being a poet aside, this was good. So, I think this should have been written as ...

Hey there Witch! As niteowl said, the concept behind this was great, but it could be a little better if you worked on the formatting. As you said, it would ...

Hey Bailey! Remember to be careful about posting your full real name on the net. Can be dangerous, dear. Now! Onto the review! It was a good poem, slightly cliche, ...

Hey there Nickelodeon! This was good! I liked it! The lines were short and simple, nothing too overdone here. I think somethings could be tweaked a little, but I think ...