Junglelover

They are probably going to slaughter the Maximum Ride series... Apparenly they wanna use the girl who played Bella and the dude who played Edward as Max and Fang. If ...

Hi Skins! I'll try it, shouldn't be too hard. :D I'll try to do as good as one as you did for me. :D Red is for spelling errors. I ...

Hi Calligraphy! I like it! :D I feel bad and useless compared to all the other reviews you have gotten. But, you asked so I will. The wind is strong ...

Hi Cal, Just a few nitpicks. Todd, from his snoring slumber, leaped up eyes wide ready to roundhouse kick the first person we saw. I think you mean 'the first ...

Hi iheartbook! Walking into that room was risky, and Karen knew it. But she couldn’t, not see him. She had waited a few days, but knew she needed to get ...

Hi Crimsona! I'm not sure if your lucky, or unlucky. I don't know a lot about poetry, but I'm reviewing anyways. I like it! Why are you\she said, because of ...

Hi Sassykat! I'm back! She would finish her test with the school counsilor half the time, who would talk to her as if she had down syndrome. Wouldn't down syndrome ...

Hello Manpuddin!! They didn't saw me The only thing I would change is this, 'They didn't see me' The 'saw' to 'see'. I also agree with Prokaryote! You made me ...

Hi Elite! His mother had met the same fate thirteen years earlier. Life was tragic for Timothy. He was twelve, Okay, If Timothy is twelve, and his mother died thirteen ...

Hi Sassykat! The little ball of fluff angled itself down and landed on a tree, and sat there. How did a tree get to be in a chimney? Maybe you ...

Hi WritingWords! Did Julie and Aly already hear about it? You just forgot to put a another L in her name. She was wearing a long skirt and white blouse, ...

Hi Kat! Welcome to YWS! They said nobody like Mark was going to like me. I think it should be, ' They said nobody, like Mark, was going to like ...

Hi Tigs! I'm not going to look at all the other review, just because there are a lot. You need to work on your Punctuation Marks. I'm sure other people ...

Hi kitx! Of course, Fey aren’t the only species on the island. You spelled species wrong,you spelled it like this speices. “Thank you.” I said, “And I’m not a Princess ...

Hey Embee, I think you did a good job describing this. Like 'inky sky'. :D I think you should describe Samantha a little bit more. How was she talking? Was ...