Junel

Thanks your reviews have continued to be very helpful. I have changed Ana's name, but just haven't put the changed name up because that is so many places that I ...

Thanks for all this amazing feedback it's helping me a ton. Although there is one more chapter to part one that I think you have just missed.

Hey, so yeah I do plan on making this MUCH longer this is my very basic first draft that mainly is just getting the main plot written out more than ...

Hey, thanks for this wonderful review. First off yeah my punctuation needs some work, I threw this together in the middle of the night and really haven't looked at it ...

This was written as a very specific school paper that was supposed to be like this, and I just put it up here. If I had been writing this for ...

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this!

For the most part I can tell the difference so I think your ok.

Thanks for the review!

Your Welcome!

Thanks for the review!

Oh, ok that makes sense.

Your Welcome, I always love to help others!

Oh, idk know how, but you might want to make that to make it more clear because when you say flashed back it can be interpreted as here just rushing ...

Thanks.