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Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 3
Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! I'm going to take a stab at an interview. XD I liked the beginning. You started it with something that made ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Picture Frames
Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! *Shudders* First of all, I loved the intro. It got me hooked. Why was his memory gone? Where was his family? ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Fire Starter
What an amazing story! I'm just going to quit with the preamble and get to the review. XD The beginning held my attention. It made me want to read more. ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Doors
Wow. That was amazing! I'm personally no songwriter, but I wouldn't be surprised to hear something like this come onto the radio! These weren't just flimsy analogies put to cheap ...
Jul 15, 2016 -
Re: Sleepless
Wow. I have never been thoroughly sleep deprived before, but you have given me a glimpse into it. I have had sleepless nights, but I had never once thought that ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Wonderings
Wow. I don't even- that was literally the best poem I had ever read. Because see, it was one that I could actually understand, yet it was perfectly descriptive. I ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Elegy of a Dream
Wow. This was really good! I'm not an expert at poetry, never touched the stuff. But there's still something really interesting about the way that you wrote this. I'm assuming ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 2
What an excellent chapter! I really enjoyed the way that you described things. I could practically see the scenery! The only thing that I wished could have been improved, was ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Cultural Clash
Hey! This short story is pretty good, but I have a couple suggestions. There really isn't much to do in the way of describing things as this is a short ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: A Beautiful Day
Truly an excellent story. I can recall attending a burial, it was almost exactly like this. I could see everything clear like a picture. I watched a boy stare at ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Ukel
Hey there, DivergentDemigod! This was actually pretty good! Not to mention funny. I really liked how you wrote this story from an interesting point of perspective. I never would have ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Ode to those
That was beautiful! I love the way you did this poem. I'm no expert at poetry, but I have seen enough to tell that this is super good. I like ...
Jul 13, 2016
