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JuliasSneezer

JuliasSneezer

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 3

    Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! I'm going to take a stab at an interview. XD I liked the beginning. You started it with something that made ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Picture Frames

    Good day, Cups here to serve a delicious review! *Shudders* First of all, I loved the intro. It got me hooked. Why was his memory gone? Where was his family? ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Fire Starter

    What an amazing story! I'm just going to quit with the preamble and get to the review. XD The beginning held my attention. It made me want to read more. ...

    Jul 20, 2016
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Doors

    Wow. That was amazing! I'm personally no songwriter, but I wouldn't be surprised to hear something like this come onto the radio! These weren't just flimsy analogies put to cheap ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Sleepless

    Wow. I have never been thoroughly sleep deprived before, but you have given me a glimpse into it. I have had sleepless nights, but I had never once thought that ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonderings

    Wow. I don't even- that was literally the best poem I had ever read. Because see, it was one that I could actually understand, yet it was perfectly descriptive. I ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Elegy of a Dream

    Wow. This was really good! I'm not an expert at poetry, never touched the stuff. But there's still something really interesting about the way that you wrote this. I'm assuming ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 2

    What an excellent chapter! I really enjoyed the way that you described things. I could practically see the scenery! The only thing that I wished could have been improved, was ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cultural Clash

    Hey! This short story is pretty good, but I have a couple suggestions. There really isn't much to do in the way of describing things as this is a short ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Beautiful Day

    Truly an excellent story. I can recall attending a burial, it was almost exactly like this. I could see everything clear like a picture. I watched a boy stare at ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Ukel

    Hey there, DivergentDemigod! This was actually pretty good! Not to mention funny. I really liked how you wrote this story from an interesting point of perspective. I never would have ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Ode to those

    That was beautiful! I love the way you did this poem. I'm no expert at poetry, but I have seen enough to tell that this is super good. I like ...

    Jul 13, 2016


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