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Re: Bliss Was Ignorance: Chapter 1
Hello! I haven't done a review in a while, so I hope this gets rid of my writer's block. Firstly, I can say that this was a wonderful read, jumping ...
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Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title
This is probably the best thing I've read the entire two days I've been here. The words make no sense whatsoever but at the same time they also kind-of do. ...
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Re: A night out
Review! I like how this poem is about the insecurities the character has and her trying to ignore them and play pretend, whilst seeing others take no effort to look ...
Aug 4, 2024 -
Re: 911
Review!! (I'm not good at reviewing so please pardon my lack of vocabulary) I think this poem was simple and effective, with a bit of dry humour tying it all ...
Aug 4, 2024 -
Re: Town of Richardson (Five more short stories)
Review time! I really enjoy the short stories that link up with different perspectives, and that each character has their own personality, including flaws and character dynamics. Denise was really ...
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Re: Newfound Edges
Hi! I really like that I can feel the character's yearning from this poem about growing up and changing, and that things from when we were young seem a bit ...
Aug 3, 2024 -
Re: Of race cars and demons
I was absolutely enamored with this story! It had a nice twist to it that I didn't expect, and it was unique. I like the symbol of the race car ...
Aug 3, 2024 -
Re: That One Old Screensaver
Hi! I love the use of metaphors in this poem, as well as the meanings behind them. I can even sense the frustration and satisfaction of the character as if ...
Aug 3, 2024 -
Re: The ghosts of your past are still haunted
I'm not good at reviews, but here we go! This hit hard, coming from someone who's been hurt by many people. Your writing really captures the hatred for these people, ...
Aug 3, 2024 -
Re: Perdita Beaumont-The mysteries of love
Whoa, this was a rollercoaster of emotions to take in. I really adore your writing! I've read a few of your stories, and they were all filled with interesting plots ...
Aug 3, 2024 -
Re: Hidden feelings.
Among the few poems I've read, this one looked really intriguing! I like the format and the opposing contrast in the lines, it's like I'm reading two separate poems at ...
Aug 3, 2024 -
Re: she's dead now.
This is my first review, but hopefully it's up to par. Wow, this poem gave me chills!! When I read this, I felt like I was really experiencing the raw ...
Aug 3, 2024
