Judge94

thanks for your review! it does kind of sound like a description of a scene instead of emotions and i really do see what you're getting at. i didn't really ...

hey! thanks so much for your review, it made me happy to be on this site!!! i'll make some changes like you suggested, and i'm super grateful for your insight ...

thanks! I'm so happy to hear you liked it. I love your suggestions and will continue to work on this!

thanks so much for the review! it's wonderful to have some fresh eyes on my writing :)

Thanks so much for the insights! You pointed out some stuff I didn't even think about :)

Thanks so much for the nitpicking, actually! I'm always happy to fix up my grammar mistakes. I'm really happy you liked it, and have made some changes and added some ...

Thank you for all the grammar corrections. I always have trouble catching them!

Thank you! I fixed the mistake and now, that I think of it, it is like The Giver! :)

Thank you for reviewing! I'm not sure if you read it before or after my edit, but I added some paragraphs that outline the conflict right before "I know they ...

Thanks! What happened was that I copied and pasted it into an email and the formatting got screwed up. I fixed it now. I meant to put "flat with" but ...

Thank you! I am glad to get a review on anything, especially a helpful one like yours. I added two paragraphs right before "I know they are waiting in the ...

I like the repetition. You described how public teen pregnancies can be made and that was amazing. I can really feel the panic and shame of the narrator. It's almost ...