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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thank you!

    Sat Apr 02, 2016 1:28 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thank you!

    Sat Apr 02, 2016 1:28 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thank you!

    Sat Apr 02, 2016 1:28 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thank you for the review TZH! In reality, I do believe I can do anything I set my mind to, but I also want to show that sometimes people do ...

    Sat Mar 26, 2016 2:49 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thanks for the review! Personally, I do believe I can do anything I set my mind to, but I wanted to show that sometimes people do fail no matter how ...

    Sat Mar 26, 2016 2:46 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thank you!

    Sat Mar 26, 2016 2:43 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Aley, thank you so much for the review! I agree that the beginning is weak, and I will work to make it more intriguing. I'm not sure what you mean ...

    Sat Mar 26, 2016 2:43 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Didn't Grow Wings

    Thank you for the review! Personally, I do believe I can do anything I set my mind to, but this poem wasn't about me. I wanted to express that sometimes, ...

    Sat Mar 26, 2016 2:32 pm
  • Other » Romantic, General Re: Momma's Love Recipe

    Thank you for the review! Yeah, I agree it should be longer, but my muffin box I was going off of was about this long and I wanted it to ...

    Mon Mar 14, 2016 6:13 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Okay With That

    Thank you!

    Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:53 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Okay With That

    Thank you for the review! This was really helpful. Since punctuation has never been my strongpoint, the specificity in this review was a big help. Thanks again, Joy

    Tue Feb 02, 2016 1:55 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Okay With That

    Thank you!

    Tue Feb 02, 2016 1:53 pm
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Aware (title work in progress)

    I saw the prompt a long time ago and have been rolling it around in my head for a long time. Thanks for the review Authorian! It was very helpful.

    Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:13 pm
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Aware (title work in progress)

    Thanks Ladybug! This review was really helpful.

    Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:10 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Card Towers

    Thanks for the review Swordsman! You got this theme right on point, though I suppose themes are really up to the reader. : ] Thanks again for the review and ...

    Thu Dec 24, 2015 1:29 am


Always do what you are afraid to do.
— E. Lockhart, We Were Liars