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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary Entry

    Thank you so much! :D

    Apr 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary Entry

    Well, if you need points, go ahead, write the review! I believe in you. :D

    Apr 21, 2020
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: For all my fellow writers.

    Not a review, just saying. Thank you for this letter! I needed this. :D

    Apr 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Bridge to Nowhere

    Thanks for your suggestions, really. :D

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Bridge to Nowhere

    Thank you so much, really! Sorry, but... do you have any suggestions on how the poem might end? I'm just kinda stuck on that part.

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Bridge to Nowhere

    Thank you, really! I didn't even notice all of those alliterations and such you pointed out. I wrote this so long ago that I'm not sure when I did it. ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fairy Tales: 4-6

    Yeah, Happy Review Day! You ought to join a team or at least do a few reviews!

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Not fat! Just Stout!

    I don't know if it offends, really! Honestly, I think it's a good poem. I don't really think it'll hurt.

    Mar 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Cotton Mill

    Thank you, really! And thanks for taking the time to do a bit of research :D. I wrote this in the seventh grade, so it's definitely not perfect. But I'll ...

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Politics, Theatre Re: Scorpions: The Sequel

    No, you're fine. I just wished I understood it more, that's all. Really. I'm really sorry if I sounded angry, I just... *sigh*. Thank you, though, for your explanation.

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Other » General, General Re: Just a question for Young Writers

    Hey! I've got stuff on Wattpad. Let me warn you though, it's not great. My account is Lia5Giba. Also, don't really know about fantasy/mystery, as I'm not very good with ...

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Fire Girl - Prologue

    Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it. I'll definitely change some things in my story.

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thoughts of Insanity

    Thank you for your suggestions. Honestly, I don't know what I was doing in this poem. I was pumped up and not really thinking straight. In this poem, I thought ...

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Quotation Poem

    Thank you so much! I did not really take any influence from other poets, I just kind of took the quote and went with it. But thanks!

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Fire Girl - Prologue

    Thank you for this, really! I'll start developing it more.

    Mar 23, 2020


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman