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Re: daydreaming
Oh, and I got that first sentence of your review too. ;)
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: daydreaming
I know I have to redo this poem, so thanks for giving me feedback! And I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for taking the time. :D
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: daydreaming
Hey! Thanks for this review. You thought about my poems in ways I didn't think about, and you're right to have a lot of criticisms. You give really good reviews! ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: daydreaming
Thanks for this! I'll take your suggestions.
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: Guardian of the Graveyard
I don't have a whole review, but I would like to comment on the world building of this piece. It's excellent! You really have created something, even a history that's ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Letters I Will Never Send
^_^
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Wakanda FOREVER
Rest in peace, Chadwick Boseman.
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Letters I Will Never Send
Hey! I don't know if this is real or not, but either way I liked this. If this isn't real, then I like this character and all the relationships they ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Procrastination
Also, those metaphors you suggested for procrastination are really creative! An empty inkwell? I would've never thought of that.
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Procrastination
Thanks for reviewing this! I'm glad you liked the poem. And I'll look into your suggestions, I promise. This poem is rough, so I completely get your criticisms! :D
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: smell of sunshine
Don't have a review, just wanted to say that this is actually a really good poem. Not even humorously. It's just a great poem overall. I feel nostalgic and thoughtful ...
Aug 29, 2020 -
Re: Procrastination
Hey! Thanks for reviewing this. I completely agree on all of your points that you made. I'm not the best at rhyming poems, but I decided to give this one ...
Aug 29, 2020 -
Re: Procrastination
Thanks for reviewing this! I%u2019m glad you liked it. And I completely get why those last two lines seem jarring%u2014I%u2019m not a big fan of them myself, but I couldn%u2019t ...
Aug 28, 2020 -
Re: Test #2
Then the cat met the fiddle and swooned. A spoon and a dish Made love with a fish... Should I stop taking these meds soon?
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: All the Love in the World
Thanks for this review! I%u2019m glad you liked the song. :D
Aug 5, 2020
