JourneyGirl

Thank you for reading! I appreciate the review! ....Also, I really like your poem!

Thank you so much for reading! Your review is very much appreciated! I'll try to keep this advice in mind for the future!

Thank you for reading! Your review is much appreciated!

...... Also you get a hug for being a fellow fan of "Harrison Bergeron," "The Lottery, " and "1984." They're all wonderful and true classics

Thank you for that wonderful review! I'll definitely look into your suggestions and I appreciate the time and specificity. I'll definitely let you know if I do make it a ...

Oh I got the "Engwand" thing. I think it was supposed to be like what America would have called him when he was younger.

So cute! How old was this kiid at the time? I used to love K.N.D.!! Anyone else??

I love this! Its a really great idea to start with the parents meeting. I love how the fathers word are almost like poetry. I cant wait to see wherethis ...

It finally works!

I edited it, though I still didn't add much.

Again thanks for the review! I really appreciate it! I will definately let you know when I post the next chapter! The thing about breaking it into paragraphs: I think ...

Thanks for the great review! I'll edit it when I get a chance, probably later today.And if you couldn't tell I'm insanely obsessed with the Hunger Games. After I finish ...

Again, sorry it's short and not sure how good it is.

I loved this! I was laughing so hard I almost started tearing up! I hate the real Twilight, so I always look at parodies, but this one is by far ...

I know this is really short and the names are terrible and it is probably horrible. I wrote this off the top of my head just now.