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  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Story

    I like a type of story that is adventures and when they are tring to look for his parents and then they meet people dearing the journy It might take ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Magnificent Manhattan

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    I like that there was a lot of descriotion A whirlwind of sound engulfs you the second you step out of the illustrious yellow cab. New York- an uproar of ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: MY China story

    I like that you character of your is helpful in the story When I am done with my work for the day, I hurry home to see Shen Ya. When ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Astorian Tales - Part 2

    It is good that it sort of sounds like it took place in the medials ages. I also like that their was a lot of describlction in the story. I ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: To Live in This Moment

    I wonder if she could have not put too many commas in the sentences. I like that there was a lot of describing. I what I like it is the ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: To Live in This Moment

    Mar 11, 2016


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia