JosephBohnenberger

Kafka, this is just a rough draft and people pick on people to impresses there friends and thats what came from here. And it was by the readers eyes and ...

Thanks, It was written in like five minutes I think. I wrote this when in 8th grade, but thanks for the true judgement.

thanks, its just a rough draft I wll make sure to do that.

During the story when he read that book in English class he was accually reading about himself that's why he couldnt finish it because it meet up with present time. ...

I agree with everyone else, this is a great poem. Anyone could learn for this poem, the tone was just perfect I felt really attached with this poem. Great Job, ...

Also agree with Bryan, I do like it great imagery.

I understand man, first poem I ever wrote when I was 11 so I put it on here to see what people would think. But yea man I understand. I ...

The ending just set it off, very well done. Good Job.

It is very well written. I must ask is this a book your writing, what exactly is the message?