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Re: The Moon Spirit Chapter One
Hello. Jordin here to review for you I hope it helps you out. The sky was dark, gray First you spelled Grey wrong secound this would sound better as The ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: Burn
Hello Ahhh. nice name, Jordin here to review this here I review because I know what it is like to really burn, I hope it helps. This looks like haiku ...
Jun 22, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 9, A Little Emotion
Dark! Jordin here to revive this amazing review for you I already love it. :D Your faithful fan. I hope it is of some use to you. :) I not ...
Jun 22, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 8, Storming Rustboro
Hello again dark here to review your great works. I am hoping that in some way this small insignificant review will give you the help to improve your book. :) ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Dawn Encounter
hello there. Jordin here with a review for a care bare c:. Well this is a strange way to write it you are talking about these people yet you know ...
Jun 15, 2013 -
Re: Im me
Hello smile123. Jordin the greatest of all twits is here to write a review that will last for an eon or two. Just kidding, I hope it helps! Okay the ...
Jun 14, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 7, A Crazy Little Colour
Hello dark. Jordin here with a review for you (I will review all of you work I love your work.) I hope it helps. I knelt down an kissed one ...
Jun 14, 2013 -
Re: The Pianist
Hello cgirl1118. Jordin here with a review for you I hopes it helps you out a little bit. I hope it helps. :) I think I like Haiku poetry dark ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: The Land Of The Free
Hello Deadpoet. Jordin here with a review for you (A Deadpoet.) I sure hope it is of some help to you. I don't see the land of the free, Okay ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: When All That's Dead
Hello Bekkabmcdvittt. Jordin (The lion hear-ted.) here with a review for you (I am here to do a small review so...) I sure hope it is of some help to ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 6, Lasting happiness.
Hello dark. Jordin here with another review for you (Your writing always rocks!) Keep it up. I am hoping that this is of some use to you. but I never ...
Jun 8, 2013 -
Re: Ten past four.
Hello Blackwood. Jordin here with a review for yah (Although I do not think I can be of much help to a 100 year old.) I thought this site was ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: The Decoder - Chapter 10
Hello twice again barefootrunner . Jordin here with another review for you my fellow knight of arms .(Fellow knight at arms.) First off you need to make this writing smaller ...
Jun 5, 2013 -
Re: The Decoder - Chapter 9
Hello again barefootrunner. Once again jordin is here with a review for you (Fellow at arms also a knight of the green room.) I really hope it is of some ...
Jun 5, 2013 -
Re: The Decoder - Chapter 8
Hello barefootrunner. jordin here with a review for you (Also a fellow knight.) and fellow at arms, anyway I really hope this is of some help to you. First off ...
Jun 5, 2013