Jolley10101

This is a very well done poem! I felt the emotion you put into this poem really well! Somethings I loved that you did was the repetition of "It hurts" ...

Oh it's fine. Thanks for the review

Thanks for the review! I will take all your advice to make my poem better.

This was a wonderful poem, it sounds like the character is under the 'spell of love' and gets into trouble. It can be related to everyday love where someone gets ...

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Sorry, I meant only chapter 1.

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Sorry, I meant only chapter 1.

Sorry, I meant only chapter 1.

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Hey, it's Jolley10101 just reviewing your poem. I believed it was an amazing poem. It can relate to everyday peer-pressure to teenagers or high-schoolers. Even to adult. The only problem ...

Hey, it's Jolley10101 just reviewing your poem. I believed it was an amazing poem. It can relate to everyday peer-pressure to teenagers or high-schoolers. Even to adult. The only problem ...

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Hi, Jolley10101 revising your poem. I loved the way you made the dream not a persons dream or the speakers dream, but the days dream, it interests the reader into ...

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Hi, Jolley10101 revising your poem. I loved the way you made the dream not a persons dream or the speakers dream, but the days dream, it interests the reader into ...

Hi, Jolley10101 revising your poem. I loved the way you made the dream not a persons dream or the speakers dream, but the days dream, it interests the reader into ...