Jojo

I thought at first this was a boring nonsensical poem, but on rereading it found that there was sense in the poem. I sure don't know why trolls hate lice ...

I can't believe you people have your finals now!!! :o Poor you!!! Know what I'm doing now? Lazing around all day, staying as far away from my books as possible. ...

Good enough!!!! Nothing complicated. But you have to think whether no complications is a good thing. I just read what was in front of me. It did not make me ...

Goood work, I think it is something one can be proud of. It is difficult to write of such dark and deadly things and you did a reasonably fine job. ...

The first four lines should really get it through to your Dad. Make him feel proud, it has I bet. Maybe Shakespeare or Tennyson would not have been overly impressed ...

I honestly love it. And the gaps between chapters are almost seeming planned. The diction is very good, so are the descriptions. The way the history was presented through a ...

However hard I try, I cannot seem to find any sense. And it isn't a nonsensical poem as well. If I take 3-4 lines at a time, it's OK, but ...

I think it's good as it is. The reader perceives the whole feeling, something he has probably felt so many times himself. The 'romantic intensity' is not there so much, ...

Very good, but I sure hope I don't have you for a teacher someday. :) This does raise some very good points... I'm talking about the potty old man. He ...

I'm from India, probably one of the furthest places from where the planes crashed into 'The Two Towers' , but maybe you'll like to know how even I reacted. I ...

I do not have any vivid idea of the history of what you're writing about, and I'll have to say your writing does not help very much. Apart from history, ...

It always best to describe all the characters who play even the slightest role in a story. A vivid description of Mara would make the reader imagine better how she ...

************************************************************ right! You could have carried on for eternity and I would have still read it. The ramblings are hilarious. You have indeed taken the joke t

Well, it's pretty obvious why the prize was won by who won it. The essay, if I may call it that, has a very classical touch to it. Even D.H.Lawrence ...

The mindset of perhaps an impossibly good girlfriend perfectly and clearly put. But, I sit here and do nothing About any and everything Don't you think this could be a ...