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John Locke

  • Short Story » General, General Re: New Year

    Thank you for reviewing! The purpose of the piece was to have no punctuation and for the repetitive nature of 'new year' to bombard the reader, but thank you for ...

    Tue Feb 13, 2018 3:51 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: New Year

    Thank you for reviewing! The purpose of the piece was to have no punctuation, but thank you for your thoughts!

    Tue Feb 13, 2018 3:50 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Good Day for a Haunting

    I understand, my friend. It was a good read. Please, contact me if you every need some of your works read. I enjoyed this!

    Thu Jan 08, 2015 4:06 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Hecate's Plan Chapter One

    It was a great read, my friend. I can't wait to read more!

    Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:02 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Hecate's Plan: prologue

    When you write a war, you usually capitalize the "war" part if you are referring to a specific war, such as the Civil War or the War of Spanish Succession. ...

    Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:01 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Zade The Demon Breaker Chapter One

    Thank you for reading, my friend!

    Thu Jan 01, 2015 6:55 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    If you want advice on the draft, I would definitely post it here. However, it comes down to how comfortable you feel with others seeing the piece. But rest assured, ...

    Mon May 12, 2014 4:55 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    Matisse... I do so love his paintings, my friend.

    Mon May 12, 2014 4:41 am
  • Poetry » Satire, Historical Fiction Re: Rebellion Of The Clueless

    Hello, my friend. First, I think there is a severe lack of humor on the site. I adore satire in all of its form, finding it a worth while art ...

    Sun May 11, 2014 5:40 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Chapter 2

    Amateur? No. No. I cannot wait for more, my friend.

    Sat May 10, 2014 2:15 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Story Of My Life Chapter 1- In The Begining...

    Great story, my friend! Message me if you want me to read anything else.

    Sat May 10, 2014 12:54 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Taste the Sorrow - Part one of Ch. 1

    No problem, my friend. I'm excited for the next chapter!

    Thu May 08, 2014 3:54 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter 1 - Chateau Rouge

    I am going to read it as soon as I can, my friend!

    Wed May 07, 2014 10:05 pm
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God, Pt. 1

    Beautiful story, my friend. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    Mon May 05, 2014 10:40 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Chapter 1

    Great story, my friend. If you ever need someone to read your work, I shall be there!

    Mon May 05, 2014 8:54 pm


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