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John Locke

  • Short Story » General, General Re: New Year

    Thank you for reviewing! The purpose of the piece was to have no punctuation and for the repetitive nature of 'new year' to bombard the reader, but thank you for ...

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: New Year

    Thank you for reviewing! The purpose of the piece was to have no punctuation, but thank you for your thoughts!

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Good Day for a Haunting

    I understand, my friend. It was a good read. Please, contact me if you every need some of your works read. I enjoyed this!

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Hecate's Plan Chapter One

    It was a great read, my friend. I can't wait to read more!

    Jan 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Hecate's Plan: prologue

    When you write a war, you usually capitalize the "war" part if you are referring to a specific war, such as the Civil War or the War of Spanish Succession. ...

    Jan 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Zade The Demon Breaker Chapter One

    Thank you for reading, my friend!

    Jan 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    If you want advice on the draft, I would definitely post it here. However, it comes down to how comfortable you feel with others seeing the piece. But rest assured, ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A night in hell...

    Matisse... I do so love his paintings, my friend.

    May 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Historical Fiction Re: Rebellion Of The Clueless

    Hello, my friend. First, I think there is a severe lack of humor on the site. I adore satire in all of its form, finding it a worth while art ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Chapter 2

    Amateur? No. No. I cannot wait for more, my friend.

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Story Of My Life Chapter 1- In The Begining...

    Great story, my friend! Message me if you want me to read anything else.

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Taste the Sorrow - Part one of Ch. 1

    No problem, my friend. I'm excited for the next chapter!

    May 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter 1 - Chateau Rouge

    I am going to read it as soon as I can, my friend!

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God, Pt. 1

    Beautiful story, my friend. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    May 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Chapter 1

    Great story, my friend. If you ever need someone to read your work, I shall be there!

    May 5, 2014


Never express yourself more clearly than you are able to think.
— Niels Bohr