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Re: Judge Me
This website is titled the Young writers society. This poem describes the struggle of youth and how a youths merits are judged and compared. The majority of childcare and school ...
Jun 6, 2021 -
Re: Immortality
Ah a fresh viewpoint on an old discussion. this poem seems pretty strait forward, almost more like its dialog from an amazing thought-provoking fantasy show. If i can leave one ...
Jun 5, 2021 -
Re: Handcuffs
AH. I see a lot here, fear frustration guilt shame powerlessness futility but also the concept of uncertain good as appose to familiar pain. This website is called the Young ...
May 29, 2021 -
Re: This is the Story
This is the review that enjoyed your story. This is the review that say your writing is more of an examination of how the whole of history is a story ...
May 28, 2021 -
Re: Your Shoes
Simple yet Insightfully honest. I can see this poem in an old storybook from my grandfathers house. This feels reminiscent of classic poetry and fairytales like "the Selfish Giant" or ...
May 28, 2021 -
Re: requiem for your head
Ahhh. i might see what you are saying or rather singing. i notice a recurring reference to body form or spirit, followed by words that describe music. A staccato: means ...
May 28, 2021
