JoeBookman

Hi, I'm Joe. Your poem is intrigued me immediately because of the narrator unexpectedly turning away from Christ. The second stanza describing how the narrator still ignores him, even as ...

Hi, I'm Joe. First of all, if this poem is in fact from your own personal experiences, I want to offer my ear and support. If you ever need anyone ...

Joe here. I haven't read any of the previous chapters but the writing here is so compelling that I think I'll have to add it to my reading list. Right ...

Certain stories leave me reflecting again and again on their content, meaning, and greater implications. Rarely are these stories happy. This one falls into that category for me. I've read ...

Hi, I'm Joe. I'm so glad I clicked the link. This was honestly one of the funniest reads I've had in a long time. First 300 words gained my interest? ...

Hi Arianna! My name's Joe. This is a powerful piece of work and it carries a lot of spiritual and personal weight to it. It's read as a vision or ...

Joe again for chapter 2. I love the worldbuilding you're doing for this story. Colonies of exiles, political complexities, and the intertwining relationships between characters are great additions whi

Hi there, I'm Joe. I saw your second chapter in the green room but I prefer to start novels from the beginning, so here we go. First of all, I ...

Hi there, Littleun (I enjoy your name). I'm Joe. So this is a short piece but it's potent. I always like to start with my first impressions, and right away ...

Joe once more-- Gotta start, my favorite line in this chapter-- The air felt harsher, colder, than he expected. It's a single sentence and not even a long one, but ...

Hi again, it's Joe. I want to start off saying: wow. Between your first chapter and this one, you really upped the description, which I'm glad for. There's a much ...

Hi there, I'm Joe. I'm here to review all three chapters of your story, "Cove." I see this is a NaNoWriMo piece so it's probably unedited, and reviewers before me ...

Hi there, I'm Joe. So I looked for the story you mentioned at the start of this ("Timothy Sees Santa") and I couldn't actually find it on your profile, so ...