Jimmeniah

Hi! Thank you so much for the review, it made me smile seeing such an in-depth breakdown of my piece. I want to continue exploring these feelings and I think ...

I like the use of 'gray eyes' in this piece. How it connects the two characters and yet further highlights how grey and dreary this whole event is. So full ...

I can feel the loss in this. It brings about my own feelings of inadequacy. It speaks to me of the strength that is required to hold true to your ...

I can feel the anxiety throughout this piece. "I can feel the eyes scratching at my skin" is such an eloquent way to describe the feeling of judging stares. And ...