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Ye, hehe. I personally loathe the books, they're like reading from a bin... until I come up with something more constructive to say :-)

All his strength let him do was object with frightened head turns. that makes perfect sense. especially in context...

people dont write in diaries every day, not to mention more than once a day...

thanks for comments. the fact that you didnt know where he was from was intentional, but if you dont like that i can change it. he was going to be ...

Wow Mark! this is considerably better than your first drafts. They were somewhat reminisscent of your latin homework... This is much better. Still no idea what the plot's supposed to ...

I don't care what other people say, I think this is really good. It doesn't really fit under the category of historic though, if you are planning on do what ...