Jenthura

I really don't have a review for this, but I do have a question: are you referring to Cloud Strife from Final Fantasy? Your description of 'blond hair' and 'electric ...

Wow. MMM's review is brutal, yet...amazing in a strange way. There is really nothing left to review after that . O_O

Awesome! I love the lyrics, but the song will take a while before I can listen to you. Remember, Youtube hates me. :( Anyways, great work! *like*

Hmm, that's certainly a good point, Gracie. So far I've been thinking I rushed the firebird part. I guess I'll have to look at it again. Thanks!

Thanks for your comments, RH, and don't worry about the wait. I decided not to explain much, and leave most of it open to the imagination. It was, after all, ...

It isn't a copyright infringement because the original was 'Tyger, tyger, burning bright..." :P So full of awesomeness-sweetness-pwness-coolness, Skins!

Azila - Wow, I really didn't think I do that. Really, make it my own work? Do things not expressed in the film? Woah, what you're suggesting is near...Disney blasphemy. ...

Thanks Born2! I'l admit that I skipped quickly over the part where the drop hits the pool. It was beautiful in the movie, I could never match it. :( Thanks ...

Darn, by the time I finished my review, you edited. I need to get on the ball! (My review was 6 pages long, hence the slowness)

Awesomeness! What sort of crowd were you performing before? :D Seeing all those YWS'ers was kinda weird, they certainly aren't like I imagined them.

Lezwitch, the vagueness on Talking was purposeful. I meant for it to be a mystery until the very end, but that didn't go over so well, I guess. Lava, ai, ...

Thanks, Dudette! I'm glad you cared for James; that was the point of the story! Actually, I mis-used the word 'synopsis'. I'm pretty sure 'epilogue' would have been better. :D

I took way too long to write that -_- Yes, but it was an excellent demonstration of Time. "I wrote for 1 review long." :) I really enjoyed what you ...

True, I merely assumed that the Fourth Dimension was time, simply because I have heard it said so often (most often in time-travel references in fiction). I have heard about ...

Hmm, no editing, eh? I guess that means no reviews either. Nevertheless, it was a good read, a very realistic situation, but one that I think was resolved a little ...