Jenthura

Ok, now that I've listened to it, I'm prepared to leave a review. I'm going to be reviewing the words mostly, but with the thought of how it sounds also, ...

Nice. A little wordy. Definitely a twist ending, but a little unexpected in a bad way. I believe that a good twist ending has some foreshadowing and hints that let ...

Dude. Nice. I like this a lot. You killed it with that goddamn last line. It's absolutely absurd and I love it. It reads clean, the idea comes across well, ...

Damn. This is difficult to read. So visually interesting though! 1. Layinguch? What does that mean? Oh, it's laying and then couch. But why is couch spread out like that. ...

"That pizza needs eating" Best quote. “There you are! Holy mackerel Effie, I’ve been scouring the garden looking for you, almost filed a missing person’s report! Have you been in ...

I remember when this contest came out a few years ago. I questioned the purpose of such a contest at the time, but I realize now that being able to ...

*cracks fingers* Let's get to this. Don't let a qualm prowl to whisper near your mind, Poetry is all about smooth, fluid movement to me (unless a poem is trying ...

A book is just a book, they say. With words like thou and art and thee, Just made of paper, wood or clay, They say this, but I disagree. How ...

You know, I actually read an article about a couple in...Malaysia was it? Can't remember. Anyways, they actually did this. Took a chainsaw to a house and cut it apart. ...

Wow! I quite like the characters in this story. You lost me little while introducing the band, but the story picked up from there. You've got your characters already set ...

First, I wanna say something nice... There, done. :P Now, your quotations, (ie: "Why?") should all be on a new paragragh. So, for instance, this lovely bit of dialogue should ...

Bigfoot! :lol: First off, I want to know how you layered the pictures or whatever (second and third). Was it computer editing or was that a camera setting? Either way, ...

One thing that confused me was how you introduced the dirtiness of the boy's clothes in the beginning, obviously showing us that he had been on the streets for some ...

Wow. I travel by bus a lot too, so I can sympathize with you on the uncomfortable seating positions. I've never had any trouble getting a ticket, though, since I ...

Nice work! I like the energy in the opening scene, and the way you introduced the characters. Nicely done, but not done completely yet. Here are a few pointers. I ...