Jennya

Wow, probably the most original thing I have seen for a long time. This is review is pretty lousy but I am going to try and find something useful to ...

Nice, i really like the message you are passing on.Your poem is direct and in your face, very good! The poem isn't very uniform though and being the freak i ...

Nice, i like this.I can really relate to it. It flows nicely and I love the direct speech, it really sings to the audience. The repetition is also good. This ...

Love the twist, I was not expecting this! this was quite unexpected and this defiantly a god thing, i like how you have inc operated all the characters. But beware ...

The others have given you great comments, since I'm not to good at that kind of stuff I suggest you listen to them. You a really churning out theses chapters ...

Welcome to YWS, nice first poem! I like the repetition and the beat is quite good although it sounds a little off in some places. But I would suggest you ...

Nice, generally quite good, it reminds me very much of that great German crime show, Rex ( i think that's what it is called) . You really should check it ...

Nice, this is a poem most people can relate to. I like your voice and your use of language, the voice you present us is quite unique, I can't really ...

Amazing, Your very talented you remind me of a girl in my school who's a professional songwriter. This is just an opinion, don't over use your high notes you lower ...

I quite like your poetry and understood this to an extent, as I'm a physics student of sorts. This randomness is your style and you should keep it this way. ...

Nice, you portrayed music is very well. I quite love your last sentence, i absolutely agree with it. Makes me wonder why I haven't written a poem about music yet. ...

Hey, nice and very emotional poem. I like the colloquial direct to your face tone, it gives it a nice personal feel. Almost hard boiled in a good way. My ...

Nice, again i like your characters but i do have a few issues. In the first paragraph your used beautiful twice close together maybe use another word. Also i have ...

I loved this. Strangely haunting for something about something ( what was this about ?) bought in Wal-mart. A nice poem about consumerism. I like how it's quite ambiguous and ...

Hey, not bad. It really set's up the scene generally agree with the people above me. Raoden is basically correct about everything he says. A prologue is not needed at ...