Jennya

Wow, a really nice poem. Pretty epic and I love the message behind it, war Is always a timeless theme. I like the repartition of the first and second line ...

Wow! I loved this. Great work and a nice laugh. The end was fantastic. It read a little to much like a romance novel at some parts and the language ...

Hey, It's review day and i have come to review! I don't usually review novels but here I go anyway. I'm going to take it part by part and then ...

It's review day! And I have come to review. This is a nice simple poem, I quite like it. It has a nice feel to it and a relatively good ...

I love this. Very beautiful little poem, you should be proud. This is going to be a very bad review as I can't think of many bad things to say. ...

Nice, A rather common topic but I think you have handled it well. I'm a defiantly no grammar expert and I think the rules of grammar can be pushed a ...

Hey, I have come to make a short review! I noticed on the description you spelled schizophrenic wrong. I also suggest you do your research on the mental illness, the ...

I'm not very good at destroying things so I might disappoint but here I go anyway. I like the start, neat and structured but it seems to turn after that. ...

I like this, i find it nice simple and refreshing. But i feel like this is nothing but a conversation, I'm not sure what you are try to achieve and ...

Nice, I quite like this poem. The repartition is nice but is of the prefaces of being over done, but it not there yet so it.s okay. I really felt ...

Nice, though it did think it was rather blatantly preachy and a little bit to strong on the God side i agree that the progression is quite nice. What annoyed ...

Nice, brings me back to my not so distant childhood. Sadly where i am, park benches with such character are slowly fading away. Your really did succeed in your quest ...

Ohh, I like this. Nice use of language. I have a feeling that a lot of users here won't like the lack of grammar but personally I don't think this ...

Nice, I agree with everybody this is a very sweet and emotional poem, good work! It's very pure compared to what i write and that's fantastic. Pure simple just a ...

This reminds me of a person i used to know. Personally i don't really like poems like this, they bring me to a place where i don't want to be ...