Jennya

Nice poem, I like the strange sort of ethereal tone and language and the use of enjambment and stanza is quite well done. Your last stanza was rather beautiful, although ...

A nice poem, certainly a nice idea that you could expand and improve on. But to be honest I'm not particularly good at reviewing but I will try my best. ...

I don't know how old you are or at what level you are but I'm going to write this as if you where lets say a final year student in ...

I quite like this but I have an issue with the formatting. It came of as just lines, not stanzas or any sort of normal poetry structure. Structure and punctuation ...

Hello its review day and I have come to review. I'll review and give comments as I read. Now firstly your novel needs a name :) I quite like the ...

Okay this is very long. Will take me a while to get though. I get what you mean by the re writing though. Now the first thing I notice is ...

I really love this. Short stories have to be character driven and this has pretty good characters. This is pretty relate-able and I love the small twist at the end. ...

This is a little to ranty for my liking, rant poetry although good in the moment should be looked at and refined. I agree with the first reviewer, line beaks ...

Cool. This is pretty awesome. Really nice mood and feeling you have created. The narrator has a sort of dramatic flair that I like, a real nice sense of personality ...

Nice, I've never written a haiku myself but you have seemed to follow the pattern and the themes of that a good haiku should have. I agree with the previous ...

Nice, when I think of in direct speech I think of ancient Roman histories. Its a really great way to get something across and characterize characters ( wow that sounds ...

Hello, I'm here to review. People might look at this poem and denounce it because it against what they believe in. I don't agree with the other reviewers, just because ...

Hello, I have come to review but I have a feeling this one won't be too long, I have a feeling is poem will be quite good. Now the opening ...

Hello, I have come to review. Prologue: Now I like the start, I get a real feel for the character and the story within the first couple of sentences, I ...

This sounds a lot like a series i read called the Dresden Files and an other story of mine which features a half fairy doctor, who also solves mysteries part ...