JennyImStory

Thanks for the review! And feel free to list any "down sides" you might have found. It is a review after all and critiquing is always welcome!

Thank you! I'll get on those italics right away! Also I have some equally silly stuff in my "Dial Turners" posts. (Self promotion woot woot!)

Thanks so much! And this skit is later on in my story so there are some unexplained terms that have to do with magic system insanity. If you have questions ...

Thank you for the positivity. Another positive is that all those errors are GONE now!

Whoa I made some typos. I need to go fix that. That's just sad. Common Jenny! This is disappointing!

Thanks for the review! With that typo I don't EVEN KNOW how that happened. I think I forgot what words were for a moment, that's my only explanation.

Thank you for the review! And I plan on elaborating the world more and more as I continue writing.

THANK YOU!

No I don't see your characters as Troublemakers, it was just the 1st trope that popped into my head. I should have added more examples to clarify

Thank you! I agree with all the grammar stuff I wrote it in like an hour and was like "I don't need editing, I never edit." But I shall edit ...

Half the time even I don't know what's going on, and the character sure don't know what's going on. So yeah, it was intended. I might post another blurb explaining ...

Thank you!

We wouldn't want that now would we?

Thank you for the feedback.I'll niks a lot of the 'then's and the like. But I just HAVE to say this, Brandon Sanderson is my FAVORITE author of all time!! ...

SEE! I was RIGHT! I CANNOT SPELL!